> --- In SkunkworksAMA_at_y..., Ravenwood <Raven_at_d...> wrote:
> > I'm working on a bit of Fanfic, and only managed to get more
> than the
> > title done up to now, so it looks like I might aftuallt get the
> damn thing
> > done something. It'll be a while yet, but I'll let you have this
> teaser.
> >
> >
> >
> > "Get in the damn car already, will you?" Commented Jim,
> tapping his foot
> > impatiently as he waited fro the Terrible Trio to pile in. "The
> hockey
> > game starts in less than 30 minutes."
> > Lori's face popped up from the back seat, broad tongue
> licking her muzzle.
> > "Cool, who's playing, the Rangers? The Red Wings?."
> > "Neither," growled Jim, "A friend of mine's junior-league
> team. If you
> > think that I'd be dumb enough to turn you loose in a crowded
> stadium, then
> > you've got another thought comming." Then quieter, "And I hope
to
> god you
> > use it..."
> > Lori's face scrunched up in a real scowl, "Junior league? I
> don't wanna
> > watch a bunch of brats falling on thier face."
> > "Got a choice. Get in the damn car, or stay here. remember,
> there's
> > still no electricity after your last stunt."
> > "It wasn't _MY_ fault!" was Lori's complaint. "Des dumped
> all that water
> > on us, and it leaked down, shorting out the fuse box."
> > Jim just covered his face, grumbling something as Natasha and
> Onyx piled
> > into the back seat.
Umm, I think you mixed up Commented with Commanded...commented
doesn't fit really...
-Shad "Proof-Reader extraordinaire...in his own opinion" Devil
Received on Wed Jan 16 2002 - 06:23:46 CST