I think Yahoo crashed out my last post! Fortunately
I'd copied it to a file first!!!! In case the last
one didn't get through, her it is again!
I was hoping someone was going to carry on with this
story for me, but since we only got a few ideas, I
guess it is up to the Literacy Empowered Evil One (aka
Scrapper) to strike again...
--- Scrapper BlackDragon <scrapperbd_at_yahoo.com> wrote:
> The other two skunks nodding, shedding their
clothing
> as they squeeze into the "brass & glass" shower
>cubicle.
A small crowd was gathering about the shower
containing the three naked skunks, who to the casual
observer appeared to have almost amalgamated into a
writhing mass of fur and fleshy pink bits.
People were staring and gesturing towards the bathroom
section of the shopping mall, making Jim wonder if
they were having a promotional sale. Following the
growing crowd, Jim squeezed through towards the front,
trying to catch a view. When he did catch a glimpse
of the crowd pleaser, he was unsure what to do next.
Should he run now and avoid the blame and trouble that
was inevitably going to follow, or should he take it
like a man and drag those disrespectful little bitches
home by the ear, as they deserve!
His temper rose, over riding his self conciousness
caused by the growing crowd and strode purposefully
over to the shower display, that was now starting to
have little wet marks over much of the glass screens.
"GET - OUT - HERE - NOW!" commanded Jim.
Three skunk faces appeared at the door "But we were
just getting to the best bit."
"You'll be getting nothing but trouble if you don't
get out here now and put your clothes on!" growled
him amid a sea of amazed onlookers.
"Okay..." came the demure response.
"Boo, mean bastard!" came from the crowd "Yeah, you're
ruining the show!", "Leave them alone" and so forth as
the crowd jostled to get nearer the spectacle
The engulfing and now unruly crowd had attracted the
attention of store security, who were now battling
their way towards the front, shouldering spectators
aside.
Jim was being pushed and shoved, the sea of bodies
crushing in on him, slowly squeezing the air out of
his lungs as he struggled to stand against the ensuing
riot.
"Move back, move back, security coming through!"
shouted a portly guard, crashing over the top of some
hapless people midway through the throng who were too
slow to get out of the way.
Jim couldn't breath, he was being crushed by the crowd
now pressing to get either closer to the girls or away
from security. It all went black as Jim passed out
and fell to the floor with a noisy thud. The pressing
crowd trampling Jim's limp body, to the horror of the
sisters who had a clear view of events from the
slightly raised position of the shower recess.
"We've got to help Jim!" screamed Natasha, "They're
killing him!"
The door was flung open and three naked skunks issued
forth in a fury of claws and teeth, literally tearing
a path through the startled crowd to where Jim was
lying.
The bloodied crowd drew back as the skunks reached
Jim. "Here dear, you might want this" said an older
woman passing each of the girls a towel from the
nearby display.
Onyx folded the towel and put it under Jim's head,
Natasha rolled up her towel to elevate Jim's feet and
Lori covered her Jim's body with her towel.
"It's a good thing mom made us take that first aid
course!" said Onyx, turning to face her sisters...
"That wasn't actually what I intended you to do with
them..." said the woman as security shouldered her
aside, grabbing the three naked girls and hauling them
to their feet.
"It was them! They were messing up the display,
annoying the shoppers then attacking people!" accused
a shop assistant, indicating the striped trio.
"Let us go or you'll be sorry!" threatened Lori,
fighting against the security guard, who was too big
for her to overpower.
"You're the ones who're going to be sorry missy!"
growled the guard, tightening his grip on the
struggling skunk.
Jim was still lying on the floor, covered by the
towels, looking a sorry sight as a few bruises from
being trampled were becoming evident on his face.
"We've got to help Jim!" Onyx implored again.
The guards we holding the girls in a small circle,
attempting to keep their more private features out of
the view of the public.
"I've got an idea!" grimaced Natasha as the guard
holding her gave her arms a sqeeze, "Follow my lead!"
She kicked out at the guard to her left, her sisters
following suit. Since they were in a circle, each
guard received a vicious kick with a clawed foot.
The plan worked, for the startled guards loosened
their grip sufficiently to allow the struggling
captives to break free.
"Together now!" Natasha yelled, turning to face the
crowd and flipping her tail high. Her sisters joined
her, spraying the crowd with their foul musk.
The girls rushed to Jim "We've got to get out of
here!" snarled Lori, "We'll be in deep for sure
otherwise! Quick hit them again!"
Three tails went high and the second wave of musk hit
the already nauseated crowd. People were retching and
falling to the floor, grabbing their throats and
rubbing their eyes.
"Help me!" implored Onyx, grabbing Jim under one arm.
Natahsa grabbed Jim's other arm and Lori grabbed his
feet. Quickly the trio made a break for the door,
heading back towards the car park and Jim's parked
car.
The girls didn't notice the surprised looks of
shoppers as they sprinted naked through the mall,
carrying Jim along with them. They found the car and
frisked Jim's pockets to find the keys.
"Get him in!" ordered Lori, opening the back door and
jumping over into the drivers seat.
Onyx and Natasha loaded Jim into the back floor and
jumped into the rear seat. Lori started the engine
and jammed the car into gear, causing it to shoot
backwards into the car behind.
"Shit!" muttered Lori changing gears as the other two
screamed.
The car shot forward this time, sliding along the wall
as Lori overshot the turn, accompanied by more
screams for her sisters.
After driving for a while, Lori saw a park and decided
to stop, as she now had no idea where they were. The
girls carefully lay Jim out on the grass and sat down
to wait.
"We've really done it this time!" sobbed Onyx, "It's
out fault Jim's dead!"
"No, he's alive..." said Natasha feeling the pulse in
his neck "We'll just have to wait till he comes
around."
The skunks rummaged through the car to find something
to wear, as the daylight was fading and the air
turning cold. They covered Jim in a silver emergency
blanket kept in the boot of the car and sat down to
wait. It was a sorry little group that sat around as
the sun slowly went down.
Presently the fresh, chilly air awoke Jim, who sat up
slowly with a groan. "WHAT happened!"
"Are you okay?" asked Natasha, coming over to help Jim
sit up.
"I feel like I've done ten rounds with a heavy
weight!" groaned Jim, rubbing the bruises on his face
"And WHAT are you wearing?"
Natasha had the only one of the three bath towels that
had survived the escape tied around her and the other
two appeared to be wearing some form of sleevless
dresses that hung down to their knees at the front,
though stopped above their tails at the back.
"They're the seat covers from the car," said Onyx
sheepishly "it was getting cold and it was all we
could find. We had to put holes in them for our arms
though..."
Jim's head was foggy. Last he could remember was
walking through the mall looking for the girls, next
he remembers is waking up in a park in the twilight.
He slowly got to his feet and looked at the back of
the car. He shook his head at the broken tailights
and scrapes along the front fenders.
"I don't want to know." said Jim flatly "I just want
to go home."
Lori handed Jim the car keys and the trio silently got
back into the car.
Jim got into the drivers seat and started the engine.
"What was I thinking" muttered Jim to himself as the
car pulled out onto the roadway "I was just asking to
be punished taking these three out in public..."
The End?
Well end of the story, but I'll write a few prequel
parts, since The Man himself (Jim) has suggested the
girls should visit the bedding department! I'll
compile the whole lot, edit it down and post to the
files fan-fic sectioin, though I'll post the parts to
the group as I complete them.
Scrapper, Black Dragon, who has struck again!
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Received on Wed Feb 20 2002 - 23:01:41 CST