--- Wyldesyde <wyldesyde_at_telus.net> wrote:
> go ahead and post it, anyways. i've always found
> that the only way to tell
> if a story is any good is to let others read it.
Correct, as after a while, the more you re-read, the
more faults you start picking and the less you like
it. One of the reasons I just compiled what I had
with the mall story and posted. Also if you review it
too much, the freshness can go out of the story as you
"water down" ideas.
> a story about Onyx discovering the joys of canine
> knots. Being that this is my first attempt at
>erotic writing, I am undecided on if I should post
>the story, though. I have just reread it after
>writing it a few months ago; it does not seem as good
>now as it was then.
Yeah, post. I'll give you constructive criticism, if
any is required! Heck, it could be better than you
think! My only tip for writing erotica is to use a
lot of suggestion and implication as opposed to using
full on mega detail. For me anyway, I found the
result not as good when I tried to get too graphic.
Most of you have better imaginations than I have
description skills!
Scrapper, Black Dragon, who's always happy to read
other's posts.
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Received on Tue Mar 19 2002 - 15:22:39 CST