--- payne_brandon <payne_brandon_at_yahoo.ca> wrote:
> Lori, Natasha, and Onyx along with Valencia,
> Desiree, and Jim were
> out in the park about to take in the fireworks. The
> girls wandered off to check out the sights.
>
> This one just writes itself in so many possible
> ways. Any takers? Hehehehehe.
>
No, Brandon, I think you'd like to just 'go off' and
describe the girls 'colourful multiple explosions'
culminating in one 'big bang' as they all 'see stars'.
Three does make a crowd, remember...
Who cares what fire works really look, if we were
after reality I'd read the newspaper. Hmmm, check
that, maybe not... O_o
Scrapper, Black Dragon, not prepared to put a match to
this one....
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Received on Thu Jul 11 2002 - 01:48:58 CDT