Hmmm, little bit to cover in this email, so may want to
grab a beverage, make yourselves comfortable, etc...
I've been busy, slack or combinations of both. Finally got
around to reading and reviewing the stories and a few pics
furs have submitted to the group. (It was still 98oF
yesterday at 7pm, didn't feel like doing much else, and the
house has no air conditioning! Though having said that,
today it is 90oF and 7pm and I'm emailing from work in A/C
comfort...) So those of you who've submitted stories or
pictures, and haven're received feedback from me as yet,
read on... Other usual entertaining guff from me too. If
I haven't read and reviewed your work for some reason
(missed it in the jumble of downloads or whatever), and
you'd like me to, email me directly (scrapperbd_at_yahoo.com)
and I'll have a look for you. :-)
Good to see furs participating, in general. Keeps interest
in to see ideas flow through.
As for hugging Jim, I think he's not really the hugging
type, unless you happen to be Des. The sentiment is nice
though. I reckon you've got about as much hope of getting
Lori to hug you... No, I didn't say you were an
unsympathetic, cold hearted bitch of a skunk! I didn't
even think it! Now your trying to put thoughts in my head
as well as words in my mouth!!! *ducks flying object* And
throwing shoes doesn't equate to putting a foot in my mouth
neither!
Looking at the Thor/Lori (yes, she would be) scale picture
by JMH. If she did a full insertion, allowing that she'd
need to be totally hollow, you'd be able to check the tip
of it by looking in her mouth. Deep throat from the other
end! >_<
Suck on this (JMH) is probably not Lori's best view
(personal opinion), even if it is a fequently seen one! I
don't know whether I should be bothered more by knowing
that you know what the inside of many of these cavities
look like, or that I agree with your depiction of them!
Fresh Sqeezed (JMH) can easily be fixed! Good facial
expressions, as usual, by the way. Short stint in the
fridge to cool it off then let it stand and no problem! Or
do like is common practice, label it, leave it there and
someone will probably drink it anyway... Definitely NOT
the first time that would have happened! Never happened
(and hopefully never will happen!) to me. Mind you, the
blend option is often popular. Just piss in a half bottle
of juice and it'll mix in nicely... *checks around to see
where his glass is*
Has anyone had to give a urine sample? (Are you qualified
to give a urine sample??? - think about it!) You may
notice that unlike dogs, most of us can't produce on
demand. It must be I'm perverse; the easiest thought I can
think of to guarantee results (not fountains or hoses or
rain etc) is to think of handing the nurse a steaming cup
of pee! Puts a smile on my muzzle and works EVERY time!
(Yeah, I know, I'm a sicko...)
Girls' Fun Time by Alvaro Santana. Reasonable spooge
effort, for a first time write. Nothing particularly
original, but a decent first time effort. It'll get better
with practice, so have another go! This is a good forum to
develop your skills. Biggest criticism is that it was
totally devoid of furry references. The three girls in the
story could have been any three girls, as there is nothing
to verify their appearance etc.
Runaways by Jordan appears to be some form of weird HTML.
If you are going to write HTML, use something that writes
it properly, as I suspect you had paragraphs orginally,
just the conversion eliminated them. You can always write
it in 80 column text and everyone can see it properly.
This piece could have benefitted from a spell checker; in
quite a few instances. Don't recap or announce what
happened or what is going to happen in the last/next issue.
Furs can go back and check, if they can't recall or just
roll with the story from where they are. This story is
developing well and I would like to see future components.
Good work.
A tip for all writing stories - (other than spell
checking!) at the top of the main body of the text, include
the story name, the author, the copyright holders and a
disclaimer (if you want). It saves me from trying to find
what it is called and who wrote it by 'looking inside' the
file. A few culprits here!!!
Of Skunks & Dragons - Little Nake In Da Ass. Seems to
have suffered the strange text/HTML conversion as well.
Pretty sure it isn't me... A general tip for stories,
unless you intend to perform it as a radio play, don't
write in script format. It greatly reduces the interest of
the reading material. Include lots of descriptions so we
know who and what we are dealing with. It is these things
that give the mental image and make the story memorable and
interesting to read. More furry references definitely
required. This story has good general development and I
would really like to see a second part. It even made me
smile a few times while reading it - now that's not a
fequent occurence! A good submission.
Pleased to see furs putting in a little time and effort to
contribute where they can. Keep up the good work. Or stop
in and read a few of the stories furs have written and
posted.
Scrapper, Black Dragon, who's still a long way to go with
his own writings.
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Received on Tue Feb 04 2003 - 00:09:27 CST