Taking some serious time (not saying you're slow, just
observing these things take much work), but we can see the
lizard is taking a nice form. :-)
Fixed the eyes, that definitely look better now, though
you've probably had these done for a while... >_< Does
look better with the duller skin too.
You're probably sick to death of furs opinions and
criticism, but this is what I see, though remember it is
just this dragon's opinion, even if I am trying to be
helpful. Some of this stuff you are probably aware of, or
even working on, but while it appears to me, I'll put in my
two cents worth.
Maybe taper the tail a little further up (increase the rate
at which it narrows) to reduce its bulk slightly.
Hands appear a bit too wide overall, maybe reduce by about
the thickness of half of Des' finger. Narrow the wrists
slightly too. Shorten the thumb a little as it appears too
long from the perspectives given.
Definition / flat sides to the knees giving more definition
to the knee cap and joint area.
Broaden and lengthen the toes and foot generally. You are
still probably getting around to the claws, so this will
change this perception as well.
I could be wrong (all the way along!) here, and JMH is the
best reference, but I think the lower jaw needs to be
slightly deeper and squarer and probably accent the
nostrils a little more (make them a bit bigger?)
Bet you weren't expecting to spend this much time when you
originally conceived this project???
You're doing damn well so far, don't let me deter you.
What's you're system specs these days? Gone out and
upgraded to some totally nailing graphics card to assist
with Des Rendering?
Scrapper, Black Dragon, who'd love to see "Des Desktop
Assistant for Windows". Stuff that bloody paper clip! :-)
> Uploaded by : nehumanuscrede <nehumanuscrede_at_yahoo.com>
> Description : Latest WIP on Des model as of 03/17/03
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SkunkworksAMA/files/Other/des31703.jpg
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Received on Mon Mar 17 2003 - 23:16:09 CST
