Damn, you've been practicing haven't you??? You're getting
heaps better, Bondofox. Only a few things to pick at with
this pic. Overall a good pic - your drawing has really
improved.
The far side of her face you've made a bit large - her
cheek should cut through about 2/3 the distance from where
it currently does and she should be a bit bustier. Well
the girls are fairly 'well-built', so it isn't just my
perverted view! I'd probably be tempted to 'cut-in' her
back or waist slightly to slim her down, but I have to say
that I think this is your best pic so far!
We going to see this in colour? :-)
Scrapper, Black Dragon, rarely surprised, but suitably
impressed with the improvements shown.
> File : /Fan Art/BF_Lori-color(WiP)_300.jpg
> Uploaded by : bondofox <cyost_at_csonline.net>
> Description : Lori, the way I'd like to see her :)
>
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SkunkworksAMA/files/Fan%20Art/BF_Lori-color%28WiP%29_300.jpg
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Received on Sun Dec 14 2003 - 21:14:29 CST
