Re: [SkunkworksAMA] New file uploaded to SkunkworksAMA

From: Scrapper Black Dragon <scrapperbd_at_yahoo.com>
Date: Mon, 31 May 2004 19:19:05 -0700 (PDT)

Now we're starting to see some guys with some ability!
Getting in the realms of this black dragon when he's
playing hard-ball! A good chuck of telekenetic power is
very useful!

Clever way of making Jeremy surrender his armour too!

Nasty way of slowing down our hypersonic cheetah, but
definitely effective. Ouch!

Er, just little points; I hope you aren't an English
teacher, as those words would be "steel form" as in metal
as opposed to "steal" as in theft; "hold that pose", not
"hole" and "its a skunk" needs an appostrophe. But we know
what you meant...

Nice story development and a good level of detail and
emphasis around the characters - keep up the good work, as
you haven't won yet!

Scrapper, Black Dragon, initialising radar tracking to find
out where three-of-Lot-6 went...

> File : /WarfareVSJeremy5.jpg
> Uploaded by : ebony_leopard <howart_at_peoplepc.com>
> Description : Look, up in the sky!
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SkunkworksAMA/files/WarfareVSJeremy5.jpg



        
                
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Received on Mon May 31 2004 - 19:19:10 CDT