Finally got a chance to check this pic out last night.
Good work Macavety! Your sketches are okay, but your
finished pics are good! Nice detail and colour blends. I
see you've adjust a few of the point I suggested about the
sketch as well. I feel quite honoured that someone
actually takes note of my feedback! I originally looked at
the 33k version, but can't spot any changes for the 22k
version, so I guess you've just compressed it better.
Facial expression is good - Onyx really appears to be
enjoying herself. I like the shading in her hair as well
as very nice frontal form (code for she has very nice
breasts).
The fur looks really soft and cuddly with a huge, fluffly
tail (must love that). Only thing I can really spot is
that the fur on her tail stripe appears to be 'running the
wrong way' in regard to you have drawn the black over white
as opposed to white over black and gives the illusion the
fur is growing from tip to base as opposed to the other way
around, as it should.
Soft blended background gives more of a contrast than plain
white. Detail on her rings (ear and nipple) is good too.
Great to see you finished of this pic Macavety; thanks for
sharing it with us!
Scrapper, Black Dragon, who may be slow to reply, but my
inbox doesn't 'forget'. :-)
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