Sounds more promising that your previous suggestion. If
you want me to look over your story plan (the story
overview / mainpoints / layout) or the written item, I
tend to be fairly accurate in judging the characters'
reactions (though I'm obviously not Jim - he doesn't have
scales or wings) and should be able to give you guidance.
Scrapper, Black Dragon, still working on another SAMA FF.
--- shipyard_bilge_rat <shipyard_bilge_rat_at_yahoo.com>
> I got the stories fixed now. It's utilizing your
> groundwork story,
> and my my storyline base. Storyline synopsis: Skunk girls
> find dragon
> scale, Des finds it before they give the scale to her,
> they have a
> small picnic, Des takes scale to SWAMA to show it off but
> scale gets
> stolen from dressing room/lockers, Someone notices the
> change in the
> skunk girls before they find out scale is gone, and
> assigns them to
> "babysit" Onika, for quite a handsome sum. <synopsis
> ends, there's
> more> Basically, they get assigned Onika to recieve
> "guidance" from
> the skunk girls as Onika sometimes does things at the
> wrong time...
> Onika keeps tabs with her guardian Treska. At a point in
> the
> storyline, Onika simply forgets to touch base with
> Treska's
> representative, and Treska pays a visit to Jim's place,
> personally...
>
> Sounds good so far? Does it fit, Jim?
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Received on Mon Jan 10 2005 - 19:47:28 CST