I would like to conend you on your writing style you have avoided the
most common pitfalls for fanfiction writers. Exsamples include;
Insert Super Character, warp charater personas, rush to sex or
violence, poor exposistion and syntax errors (oh god grammer/spelling
monstrosities). Nothing is more aggrivating then reading a fanfic and
by the time I'm to the third paragraph(if it even has paragraphs) the
protaganist has learned he's the superpowered son of a god who can do
no wrong and is about to be laid by thier 'true love' they just met
an hour ago. You not only avoided these 'night terrors' of
literature, you managed to tell an interesting little story. Looking
forward to your future posts. Thx for your contribuitons to art.
Received on Wed Feb 18 2009 - 17:13:39 CST