Just finished reading it, thought it was very good. You did a good job
of keeping the characters in character and establishing a fairly decent
plotline. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read the next
chapter :)
--- In SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com, "bustamante.philip"
<pbustama_at_...> wrote:
>
> I uploaded my first fanfic ever. Any comments you guys have would be
appreciated. Part II is
> coming up...
>
> Link:
> <http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SkunkworksAMA/files/Skunkworks%20Fan%
20Fiction/>
>
> File Name: "California Madness"
>
Received on Wed Feb 25 2009 - 14:25:37 CST