Hey guys, so I put out this next installment a bit early, but with good reason. Originally, part 4 and what is now part 5 were supposed to be two halves of the same chapter. Unfortunately, this would have made the whole thing close to 10 pages long! So.... I left you guys with a cliffhanger and will have the second, spoogier half done in a few days.
Any comments you guys have as to what I can do to improve my writing and ideas for more stories would be GREATLY appreciated. I hope you guys are enjoying so far!
-Pan
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