All I would warn against is making the characters too bad-ass. Nothing screams "pretentious" like characters who are just overly skilled. Kind of the Jean Claud syndrome.
But I would like to get this once it goes to dead-tree format. It's awesome so far.
D.O.P.R
-----Original Message-----
From: jmhcustomart2004 <a_change_of_plans_at_yahoo.com>
To: SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com
Sent: Mon, Feb 8, 2010 11:35 pm
Subject: [SkunkworksAMA] Re: New file uploaded to SkunkworksAMA
--- In SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com, David Ewell <kuchadude1_at_...> wrote:
>
> Looks like "Let the punishment fit the crime" to me. For a being who's known the freedom of flight having it taken away could be pretty devastating not to mention the number of enemies he's made during his present occupation.
Well, he doesn't live much longer. He ends up bleeding to death while lying in the wet sand while the rain comes pouring down. Not a very glamorous end for him, I'm afraid.
--JMH
Received on Tue Feb 09 2010 - 11:14:49 CST