Well, I certainly hope folks aren't thinking that Penance is just a plot device to draw "cub art". There's no actual sexual activity shown; creative camera angles and other techniques will be used to allow the reader to "fill in the blanks" with their imagination. That was why I said it was such a difficult story to write, since I have to be able to imply certain events are taking place without actually having to draw them. There are certain lines I'm not willing to cross, you know!
Her "bear" form is not something she wants. It's a physical form she was imprisoned in by her superiors. Her original intent is not to go after the "bad guys". She couldn't care less about them. She just needs the energy that sexual activity provides for her. She only kills them because that, too, is part of her punishment. The smaller form is to make it difficult for her to get what she needs (sex). Killing her partner afterwards was a necessary punishment to prevent her from ever caring for someone again. Because it would be more painful to have to kill someone you had feelings for, she is forced into not allowing those feelings to occur.
Something does change her outlook later in the story, but I'd be a fool to give the whole thing away this early in the game!
I have a pretty sizeable library on paranormal research and the occult. I first got interested in that stuff when I was in elementary school, and have probably read a ton of books on the stuff. Naturally, I'm not going to remember everything, but I recall enough to fill in the paranormal aspects of the story. But thanks for your offer just the same!
--JMH
--- In SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com, <peter10@...> wrote:
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> if i cod ide shake your hand!
> savel years ago i began toying with the idea of a furr who looks like a 12 too14 year old but has the mind of a adult.
> she is sexuley fustrated and has a extreem hate for padafile's and 1 of her passtimes is traking doun and killing/tormanting padafile's my idea for geek was she at a eieley point in her life was found bye 1 of my long time plot devivices X;) X in a sances raced her and to spite shes savel 100 yeas old he still sees her like hes litel kid but she sees X as not a fother fuger but romantikley.hes do to her looking yang skred off bye her advancess wich makes her that more nasty too freeks cose no normel guy's will go for her;).geek was a girl in the 1700's tirnd in to a vampire bye a padafile vampire but wean she tirnd she took her vampire sire apart;) X found her in lunden laving on rat's and atakign the homless.
> your dimen furr that takes the form of a girl is so too me something et! alot of furr's over time have craped allover me about how geek was a bad idea and no 1 wood ever do something liek that and how rong it is! i call me a freek like dimen girl's;) and your girl in her furr form i know is saped to be a kid but shes get a sexy side to her;) i like the dimen form more thow;). if i can ever help you feal free too email me!!! 1 of my litel hoby's is i know way toomuch about scifi/dimen';s gost's and all that fun stof;) so if i can hellp with a bloke or problem you may have feel free to pick my evil evil mind!!!
> iam glad to help! and this old wolf wood still love to show that dimen a nice time;) not too macen help her on a hunt or 2;)
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