Good line work on each panel - characters and background -
The details are just nice to look at. (Am guessing James got
to pick the store names. Hmmm...30% off axes at Gothika?
(I'll buy some for...uh... camping. Yes, that's it...camping.)
Color scheme is interesting. More experimenting to come?
Nice job on being consistent with Sari's purse location.
(Even the "big studio" artist can mess that up. Supervisors love
to use their red pencils on those kind of goofs when they occur.)
Action on Sari's bounce is nice touch. (The bounce lines
above her are fine - although a few viewers may not
recognize them as such. Which reminds me, are you
gonna add some action lines in Caterwaul? The pages you
posted last year didn't have any sfx lines.)
Background silhouetted character in motion is nice
touch as well.
Interesting fountain. Take on a real one or made up
for the comic?
[A few minor error observations last panel only:
Sari's left two earring studs missing.
Color in fountain arch, top part half, faded to a purple
hue. Same for Sari's face and "Anubis" character's shirt.
(Palette mixup?)
Proportion: Characters are a tad bigger when compared
to previous panel - but fountain a tad smaller.]
Were all the panels drawn tightly?
Was Sari drawn first then the background in the last panel?
Received on Tue Nov 23 2010 - 23:53:33 CST