..critiques etc on me story. Be truthful, as long you
don't go insulting me too hard, I can take it.
I have to get feedback so I can improve my writing style after all.
And don't come around and tell me ya don't have the time for a looong
read..it's 9kb txt-file-...that is not that much...
But I'll accept graciously the excuse of a sticky keyboard, of course
^.^
-Shad "Naw, it's not that good..or is it?" Devil
Received on Sat Sep 29 2001 - 08:53:16 CDT