At 3:46 PM +0000 9/29/01, Shad Devil wrote:
>..critiques etc on me story. Be truthful, as long you
>don't go insulting me too hard, I can take it.
There wasn't a dry seat in the house. :D
Serious critique: Good work overall. The setup works, the main scene
was handled well and the denouement was in character. Grammar was a
tad stiff in spots, but not to the point of unreadability.
Overall, a competent bit of spooge. Good show!
-MMM-
Received on Sat Sep 29 2001 - 09:14:27 CDT