> There wasn't a dry seat in the house. :D
Not sure I wanna know what he meant by that comment.... :)
> Serious critique: Good work overall. The setup works, the main scene
> was handled well and the denouement was in character. Grammar was a
> tad stiff in spots, but not to the point of unreadability.
That pretty much says it all, Shad. Very nicely handled, and quite in
character, from what little I know...
And a hell of a lot better than I expected from 'fan fiction'. :) No slur on you
intended.
> Overall, a competent bit of spooge. Good show!
Yup. Say, is anyone else feeling sorta... left out and jealous at the end there?
;)
Jace Draccus
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Received on Sat Sep 29 2001 - 15:30:20 CDT