Visit To The Mall

From: Scrapper BlackDragon <scrapperbd_at_yahoo.com>
Date: Sun, 17 Mar 2002 18:30:03 -0800 (PST)

This is an edited up version of the posts that I'd
written previously and posted to the group. There is
now a start (it didn't really have one before, it just
began...), corrected spelling, numerous grammatical
fixes and a whole new scene while in the Mega-mart.

Decided to keep this as a short story and not one of
my 'condensed novels' that I am prone to try and
write, so didn't add all the extra stuff I'd thought
of, as they are probably better covered in another
story anyway.

Feed back welcome, as it helps me to adjust up the
other story that is in the works: Scrapper - The
Challenge.

Hope it gives you a few smiles.

Scrapper, Black Dragon, who said he'd have this story
posted after the weekend!

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Received on Sun Mar 17 2002 - 18:30:05 CST