--- In SkunkworksAMA_at_y..., Scrapper BlackDragon <scrapperbd_at_y...>
wrote:
> This is an edited up version of the posts that I'd
> written previously and posted to the group. There is
> now a start (it didn't really have one before, it just
> began...), corrected spelling, numerous grammatical
> fixes and a whole new scene while in the Mega-mart.
>
> Decided to keep this as a short story and not one of
> my 'condensed novels' that I am prone to try and
> write, so didn't add all the extra stuff I'd thought
> of, as they are probably better covered in another
> story anyway.
>
> Feed back welcome, as it helps me to adjust up the
> other story that is in the works: Scrapper - The
> Challenge.
>
> Hope it gives you a few smiles.
>
> Scrapper, Black Dragon, who said he'd have this story
> posted after the weekend!
Haha, that's very good putting it all together like that. And thank's
for mentioning my name too. I take it that you got the ex-lax
mentioning from me?
-Brandon Payne
Received on Tue Mar 19 2002 - 06:24:40 CST