read it last night, and i must say its actually quite good. then again, so
was the dream it inspired.
-----Original Message-----
From: jambrassard [mailto:jambrassard_at_earthlink.net]
Sent: Thursday, March 21, 2002 6:17 PM
To: SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com
Subject: [SkunkworksAMA] Re: Hanging around? (canine knots and oral sex)
It's posted in the Fan Fiction archive under the title "Fit to be
Tied." I can't believe I actually posted this.
--- In SkunkworksAMA_at_y..., Scrapper BlackDragon <scrapperbd_at_y...>
wrote:
> --- Wyldesyde <wyldesyde_at_t...> wrote:
> > go ahead and post it, anyways. i've always found
> > that the only way to tell
> > if a story is any good is to let others read it.
> Correct, as after a while, the more you re-read, the
> more faults you start picking and the less you like
> it. One of the reasons I just compiled what I had
> with the mall story and posted. Also if you review it
> too much, the freshness can go out of the story as you
> "water down" ideas.
>
> > a story about Onyx discovering the joys of canine
> > knots. Being that this is my first attempt at
> >erotic writing, I am undecided on if I should post
> >the story, though. I have just reread it after
> >writing it a few months ago; it does not seem as good
> >now as it was then.
> Yeah, post. I'll give you constructive criticism, if
> any is required! Heck, it could be better than you
> think! My only tip for writing erotica is to use a
> lot of suggestion and implication as opposed to using
> full on mega detail. For me anyway, I found the
> result not as good when I tried to get too graphic.
> Most of you have better imaginations than I have
> description skills!
>
> Scrapper, Black Dragon, who's always happy to read
> other's posts.
>
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Received on Fri Mar 22 2002 - 21:16:22 CST