Thanks for the compliment. Inspired a dream, eh? So, which one were
you: the fox or one of the wolves?
--- In SkunkworksAMA_at_y..., "Wyldesyde" <wyldesyde_at_t...> wrote:
> read it last night, and i must say its actually quite good. then
again, so
> was the dream it inspired.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: jambrassard [mailto:jambrassard_at_e...]
> Sent: Thursday, March 21, 2002 6:17 PM
> To: SkunkworksAMA_at_y...
> Subject: [SkunkworksAMA] Re: Hanging around? (canine knots and oral
sex)
>
>
> It's posted in the Fan Fiction archive under the title "Fit to be
> Tied." I can't believe I actually posted this.
>
> --- In SkunkworksAMA_at_y..., Scrapper BlackDragon <scrapperbd_at_y...>
> wrote:
> > --- Wyldesyde <wyldesyde_at_t...> wrote:
> > > go ahead and post it, anyways. i've always found
> > > that the only way to tell
> > > if a story is any good is to let others read it.
> > Correct, as after a while, the more you re-read, the
> > more faults you start picking and the less you like
> > it. One of the reasons I just compiled what I had
> > with the mall story and posted. Also if you review it
> > too much, the freshness can go out of the story as you
> > "water down" ideas.
> >
> > > a story about Onyx discovering the joys of canine
> > > knots. Being that this is my first attempt at
> > >erotic writing, I am undecided on if I should post
> > >the story, though. I have just reread it after
> > >writing it a few months ago; it does not seem as good
> > >now as it was then.
> > Yeah, post. I'll give you constructive criticism, if
> > any is required! Heck, it could be better than you
> > think! My only tip for writing erotica is to use a
> > lot of suggestion and implication as opposed to using
> > full on mega detail. For me anyway, I found the
> > result not as good when I tried to get too graphic.
> > Most of you have better imaginations than I have
> > description skills!
> >
> > Scrapper, Black Dragon, who's always happy to read
> > other's posts.
> >
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Received on Sat Mar 23 2002 - 17:36:38 CST