That was a very good short story ;)
Interesting 'scarey' start with lots of humorous teasing.
Weak on the details though but still more than enough to tell the tale
Still some prefer to fill in their own details so lean works fine though
I think some of the positions were unclear?
Maybe I should do a reread to be sure;)
Received on Tue Sep 02 2003 - 23:01:10 CDT