> I'm just wondering if anyone saw my comic strip's
> introduction page. Hey, I'm
> feline, so I'm curious =^_^,=
I _was_ going to try and leave work on time for once and
have a look off-line tonight, but since you are
insistent...
Your physiology is passable, though need to learn to
better frame and depict in limited space. Your line work
is all monowidth, taking the depth out of your drawings.
You need to use guidlines when doing the text, as it is
fairly inconsistent. There is no toning or shading; all
flat tone black or nothing.
And the hinging point - it is supposed to be a 'one page'
contribution of your character (or characters) spectating
the Lot 6 / Extinctioners battle, that I see not even a
hint of in this picture... :-/ Yes, I know you want to
post a mini-series and introduce all your characters, but
you would be far better to post several completed pictures
(reminds me, must redo mine...) of the teams watching the
battle. Keep it simple and it will increase its appeal.
Scrapper, Black Dragon, who should be leading by example...
> File : /Comics/Extinctioners Vs Lot
> 6/Spectators/LookoutHunters1.JPG
> Uploaded by : razor_berserker <claw815_at_aol.com>
> Description : After experimenting I learned how to
> correct the membership
> mistake here. *ahem* Anyway, here's my comic strip for
> the Extinctioners VS Lot 6
> comic. This is only page 1. I'm too much the artist ^^,
> This is just the
> introduction page. The text is the thoughts of yours
> truely, Claw MacKain =^_^=
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SkunkworksAMA/files/Comics/Extinctioners%20Vs%20Lot%206/Spectators/LookoutHunters1.JPG
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Received on Tue Nov 16 2004 - 21:53:20 CST
