In a message dated 11/16/2004 11:58:37 PM Central Standard Time,
scrapperbd_at_yahoo.com writes:
> I _was_ going to try and leave work on time for once and
> have a look off-line tonight, but since you are
> insistent...
>
> Your physiology is passable, though need to learn to
> better frame and depict in limited space. Your line work
> is all monowidth, taking the depth out of your drawings.
> You need to use guidlines when doing the text, as it is
> fairly inconsistent. There is no toning or shading; all
> flat tone black or nothing.
>
> And the hinging point - it is supposed to be a 'one page'
> contribution of your character (or characters) spectating
> the Lot 6 / Extinctioners battle, that I see not even a
> hint of in this picture... :-/ Yes, I know you want to
> post a mini-series and introduce all your characters, but
> you would be far better to post several completed pictures
> (reminds me, must redo mine...) of the teams watching the
> battle. Keep it simple and it will increase its appeal.
>
> Scrapper, Black Dragon, who should be leading by example...
Well, I know it would've been better off without being an introduction page,
but I change my ideas and plans so often that it's hard to decide which to go
with.
As for the quality of my work, I know it isn't the best especially since I
draw anime anthros. Anyway, that's beside the point. I've only been using this
style for four months. Could be more, but I know it's under a year and I use
this style not that often... This is about my fourth time of using this style.
I use multiple styles as I told Jim before. If I remember right I have about
fifty different styles.
Anyway, I'm working on the second page right now, which should have the
characters reacting to the fight of the original comic strip. Either that or the
reactions will be on page three...
Before I get to far into my comic, though, I need to talk to Jim about
sometime relating to my character and his. And if I can I need to get a hold of
Max...
-Claw MacKain, lone half-god lion bounty hunter =^_^=
Received on Tue Nov 16 2004 - 22:36:22 CST