It's going to be a period or organization between Jim and I, Each character
getting revised to work best in his style, and still retain what makes them
who they are. I look forward to working with him, and also hear back from
you, his fans , as to how you think the story is progressing, Jim even has a
bit of play as we brain storm with the script, it's really fun to work with
someone as capable and multi direction as he. I look forward to the coming
comics, and further dealings with you all.
Jim aka Cheetah.. Yeah.. too many Jims.
From: SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com [mailto:SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com]
On Behalf Of Inkwell
Sent: Sunday, August 29, 2010 2:29 AM
To: SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com
Subject: [SkunkworksAMA] Re: If you're wondering what Jim's been up to the
past week or so...
There's good detail work here.
Look at the clock in panel 2 and 6. The minute-hand
shows motion of time as Manila moves through the house.
[Clock minute-hand in last panel needed to be advanced
a bit though; dovetailing clock time passing with Manila's
reflecting on her own amount of time that has passed by.]
Nice house in Panel One. [Short ruler and pencil?
...and am I seeing blue pencil line work?]
I see Jim's been allowed to restyle the characters.
How far can you go with the restyling? [I notice
Manila doesn't have any earrings; in the model sheet
or comic page.]
Congrats on the first page. Over all good work.
[...Well...there's that door frame in the last panel.]
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