Re: Cats n' Cameras updated, and other stuff...

From: Inkwell <inkwell_01_at_yahoo.com>
Date: Sun, 05 Dec 2010 10:20:36 -0000

Another well drawn page. Sari sticking her tongue
out is great. And those eyes in the last panel...Har har.

Manila is more worried about the shirt than Sari
breathing.

(Wait...Penance isn't there to give Manila a
lesson on priorities? Nooooo. Although Penance
does have a cute mischievous grin.
And how is Penance gonna pay for that shirt...
hmmm...[Who says she's buying]...good point.)

[One continuity error. Manila's back skirt
button. Page #78, Last Panel shows two small
buttons holding skirt tongue. Page #77 Panel
Four shows one button holding skirt tongue.
Skirt tongue shape is different.

#78 Last Panel: left sign edge a tad too straight.]

Sari's right hand and body shadow in last panel
is a nice touch. Ditto with Sari's mirror reflection
in Panel Two.

Overall, artwork is well done.

So, will CnC be updated every two weeks instead
of the weekly schedule? It seems to work out well
Received on Sun Dec 05 2010 - 02:20:53 CST