--- In SkunkworksAMA_at_yahoogroups.com, "Inkwell" <inkwell_01@...> wrote:
>
> Another well drawn page. Sari sticking her tongue
> out is great. And those eyes in the last panel...Har har.
>
> Manila is more worried about the shirt than Sari
> breathing.
>
> (Wait...Penance isn't there to give Manila a
> lesson on priorities? Nooooo. Although Penance
> does have a cute mischievous grin.
> And how is Penance gonna pay for that shirt...
> hmmm...[Who says she's buying]...good point.)
>
> [One continuity error. Manila's back skirt
> button. Page #78, Last Panel shows two small
> buttons holding skirt tongue. Page #77 Panel
> Four shows one button holding skirt tongue.
> Skirt tongue shape is different.
Chances are, the two dots got turned into a line on the earlier picture. The area for the buttons on the previous picture was only about 1 mm long.
>
> #78 Last Panel: left sign edge a tad too straight.]
Yeah, I had already inked that when I remembered the edges were supposed to be rounded.
>
> Sari's right hand and body shadow in last panel
> is a nice touch. Ditto with Sari's mirror reflection
> in Panel Two.
The shadows look better on the original. Unfortunately, a lot of the lighter shades get lost when scanned. Still trying to fix that. The altered colors are much brighter and more...yellow...than the original artwork. I'll figure it out...
>
> Overall, artwork is well done.
Glad you like it, man!
>
> So, will CnC be updated every two weeks instead
> of the weekly schedule? It seems to work out well
>
I may be dropping the color/greyscale work in an effort to further streamline the work and reduce the production time. I want to get the strip back to a weekly occurrence by the end of the month. The only way to do that is to do away with certain time-consuming variables, such as the coloring. I only have so much time to work on anthropomorphic stuff, so it's important that I utilize the time properly.
--JMH
Received on Tue Dec 07 2010 - 16:07:18 CST