Why is it that a new, brand name PC needs several hours of
setting up and configuring, updates and correction before
it is deemed 'safe to use'? That word beginning with M, I
suspect... At least I get a little net time while I'm
waiting (setting up for someone else!).
--- Bryan Olds <blackwolf_78_at_yahoo.com> wrote:
> Well here's my attempt at Onika a bit
> simple, but i hope you enjoy it and yes it was free hand.
Great to see some new contributors! Good 'model sheet' of
Onika. Your line work appears reasonable for sketch art,
though you have a few structure errors in regard to if you
look at her right buttock in the profile view, it sticks
backwards in correspondence with the leg, but her back does
not flow between her buttock and shoulder (easy fix) - like
it is missing part of the back of the pelvis.
> The anatomy is off and the perspective lacks something to
> be desired,
> but thats art never good enough and always a work in
> progress.
Hands and physiology generally looks good, though I'd
suggest her left foot (viewer's right) outer curve doesn't
suggest the mass of the foot properly and the inner of her
right foot could use a bit more curve to represent the
arch. Feet and hands are hard, so you've done pretty darn
well!
Personal preference (and probably a bit more realistic) is
to not define the pubic mound as sharply. Shortening the
lines so they don't extend as far upwards softens the shape
so it looks less like an appendage.
Something to keep in mind - with me, I tend to write more
if I am picking up small mistakes, meaning the picture as a
whole is pretty good, so a long review from me should be
seen as a 'backhanded compliment', if you will, as opposed
to a slap down. Overall, I'd have to say 'good work'!
Looking forward to seeing future submissions by your paw.
I suppose, if I get my act together, I should do some
practice with the digital colouring techniques Tokes taught
me the other day. Your pic of Onika looks like a good
target. I'll have a go at David's recent pics too.
That'll keep me busy (busier...)!
> Right now my hand hurts and it's 6:06am :P.
Damn, you started the day early for that sort of thing! :-P
Though not entirely uncommon on this group I suspect! >_<
In JMH's case, it often his 'balls giving him trouble -
eyeballs that is!
> Feel free to comment and enjoy :)
Oh don't worry, I'll put my 2c worth in! :-D
Scrapper, Black Dragon, if you have to work the weekend to
make ends meet, then try get a little net time while you're
doing it!
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Received on Fri Aug 19 2005 - 20:33:04 CDT